This is the end of my Slamming month and I thought I would end it with a fable and a slam. Enjoy. I didn’t.
Once upon a disenchanted dream, there was a man named Juan
He lived in the land of sky blue water; he existed on spirits such as gin and bourbon
We got caught up in “Charlene’s” web, I was supposed to introduce him to my friend
A man without a plan like Mr Evil had
but it ended up just as bad
unspeakable acts in shades of grey
I thought I was supposed to be treated that way
1 week instead of 7 and a half
with enough pain to cast a spell that lasts
when on a plane back to paradise
Nora Jones was singing, and I started to cry
Why had I let thing go from bad to worse
I felt so hopeless, without any worth
Now, it’s just a fable, a dream
Life is like that, hearts can seem
broken in bits with shards of glass
Now, to me Juan was just a pain in the ass
Breaking down, building back up
Breaking me down, my self-esteem to the ground
The bourbon made you brave
Laid me in a grave
You talked about scars
You went too far
Mine can be erased
Yours must be faced
“You’re a dancer, you said,
Put your legs over your head”
Brought me to my knees
To hide your inadequacies
Attacked me to my core
You really went to war
Forgetting the time
You said love was blind
You said you needed me more than I needed you
You once said I was beautiful
Your eyes said it was true
You said I made you cry
But you’re dead deep inside
When I danced for you the very first day
My sexual power blew you away
Now you sit in your goodwill chair
And when I dance you pretend I m not there
Breaking me down to build you up
You aren’t worthy to drink for my cup
So sip your beer, I’ll go away
I’ll build myself up and forget you one day
Loved your Slam Poetry. It really spoke to me, since I feel like “Juan’ is someone I was involved with.
Very powerful and wonderfully written!
By: A Dog With Fleas on March 30, 2012
at 2:56 pm
Thank you, I think we all had a Juan in our lives at one point. aloha
By: marilynmendoza on March 30, 2012
at 2:57 pm
lotsa pain in that!
By: buckwheatsrisk on March 30, 2012
at 2:59 pm
a whole lotta, but I’m good now aloha
By: marilynmendoza on March 30, 2012
at 8:32 pm
that’s great that you are good now! aloha!
By: buckwheatsrisk on March 31, 2012
at 6:36 am